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Ch 3 homework
Trey songs states " I,m a finish everything, all right?" This is hisexact words as evidenceof something they say.
The  writer intergrated  trey songs word by writing it out as a conversation with the audience at his show.
 He introduced it by telling what happen in that moment detail from detail up till the point when Trey songs says what he says.
He expain what he meant when he said " I,m  a finish everything. all right?' by telling the young woman he would see her shortly.
I do not suggest any changes
http://www.nytimes.com/2010/09/18/arts/music/18trey.html?ref=rapmusic